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[rahuldravidfan]

My Pandavas won. :hpraise

Glad the Captaincy burden is off me.

 

[McLOVIN]

when are we playing??

 

[CG123]

Great knock from Yudi, 126 from just 44.
Come on bowlers, we should be able to get them all out easy.

 

[MaD]

Oh yes! Yudi was just an absolute star with that great century, Monzi was also good and I was great with the ball as always, too bad didn't get any wickets but atleast we won the match. THis is more of a league rather than a story, Mihir should write more about the match and the scorecard could be much better if you spent a bit more time.

 

[CG123]

^^^ Agree with MaD, it is definitely more of a league than a story.
Just reading over the last few games, I think you have started to write more now.
Maybe try and get some colour into your presentation.
Maybe quote each innings separately, so have the pre-match build up like you do, then quote one innings, write about it, quote the next innings, and then write up the post match stuff.
Also maybe make a better scorecard, look over a few tutorials and stuff, instead of just using the quotes.

 

[Mihir Doshi]

^^^ Agree with MaD, it is definitely more of a league than a story.
Just reading over the last few games, I think you have started to write more now.
Maybe try and get some colour into your presentation.
Maybe quote each innings separately, so have the pre-match build up like you do, then quote one innings, write about it, quote the next innings, and then write up the post match stuff.
Also maybe make a better scorecard, look over a few tutorials and stuff, instead of just using the quotes.

Oh!!! Thanks For Your Suggestion Will Improve!!

 

[Varun]

Wow, Yudi you play very well.

 

[MaD]

Yes, I have trained Yudi to be the best he can be and all that training has paid off

 

[Meghraj_17]

Wow excellent type of bowling as yudi said

Wickets of Gambhir, Sehwag and Dhoni is something one wishes for.

and rahul could you move my batting order into 4 because i am an allrounder(just a request)

 

[Aussie Team]

When Is The Next Match???

 

[Varun]

Yes, I have trained Yudi to be the best he can be and all that training has paid off

Good work , you're genius!:hpraise:hpraise:sarcasm

 

[MaD]

Same lineup for the next match

 

[riz7khan12]

for my next match i too want the same lineup

 

[harrisb]

when is my team playing, it seems that everybody else has played, but not us.

 

[MaD]

There's only been 3 matches, can't you see the fixtures in the first post :doh