Requests Accepted Dr. Pepper Graphics {Back With A Sig}

Last weeks entry;
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Last weeks entry;
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Nah mate you can do better, the lighting is all over the place, dark in most, and some various blotches of lighting the other. It has no flow, and the text could be done better, also that blueish texture seems lost. However i love the idea of it, and the red texture at the bottom of the render saves it a bit. Also the background is nice and smooth.

6.5/10. or 7/10

Your better than that IMO
 
fantastic wally Dr Pepper/Peanut Head.
Love the use of textures and lighting effects. The desaturated render blends well with the bg. KUTGW
 
Really god. Nice lighting and use of textures and the text is fantastic! Great effects around the render. kiu!
 
You sure you made that? Except for the render effects (which are exceptional) everything else is bad. Text improved heaps. The backgorund is way too plain. Increase the opaciy of the render beneath the main render. Also if you are using a plain backgound then please move the render in center. The render placement is also bad.
Don't feel bad, I just felt you just dropped your own level. You have much higher potential than this. You have been delivering very good stuff from months but this not even close to that.
 
Nice Manip there. Lighting is good but I think that the text should be placed in the top right hand corner as there is a huge green patch there...
 
Version 1:
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Version 2:
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I stuffed up the delicate area of the guitar but other than that I'm really pleased with my outcome. Comments are appreciated :).
 
I like it mate, the render blends well and the background is great. As is the light textures around the render. The text is okay but could be improved, probs with a better font. And the left side of the background could do with some touching up. But its good.

KIU
 
I love the vector, nice cartoony feel. Very good, obviously not a proffesional one but it is really good. I may make a sig using that vector one day.

KIU
 

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