JamesyJames3
International Coach
No, to put it simply Manee 
Don't treat it as an essay. Put the most interesting point at the top and then put the facts down in the following pars. Don't put opinion in it if you can help it. As I said, it's not a blog. A little bit of discrete opinion is ok though.

Don't treat it as an essay. Put the most interesting point at the top and then put the facts down in the following pars. Don't put opinion in it if you can help it. As I said, it's not a blog. A little bit of discrete opinion is ok though.