Lyrics

[Shevchenko]

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I would have given everything to you
I would have done it and seen it through
You dragged me down in this pool of hate
Left me thinking was this luck or fate

Cannot explain this feeling inside of me
It?s burning fire how couldn?t you see?
I?m living in a life of misery
I?m watching you drown in treachery

It?s over ? can?t believe it lasted so long
It?s over ? can?t believe it?s now all gone
It?s over ? was it something I did wrong
It?s over ? my love to you was strong

Sincerity over hypocrisy
The only thing you never gave to me
I loved you even through your damn lies
Look into my eyes the heart never lies

Take this knife and cut out my flesh
Scrape the bones and turn me to ash
A slap in the face to this cemetery
Scatter me all over this life of misery

 

[usy]

good, nice use of your words. 7/10

 

[RoboRocks]

That's a very good song actually. Is it a real song or is it made up?

 

[usy]

I think it's real, ... it's good.

 

[Shevchenko]

It's a made up song, I've been trying tabing this song but I've only got to a minute of it

 

[Hooper]

Cool, a bit emo at the end there but

 

[Simbazz]

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I would have given everything to you
I would have done it and seen it through
You dragged me down in this pool of hate
Left me thinking was this luck or fate

Cannot explain this feeling inside of me
It?s burning fire how couldn?t you see?
I?m living in a life of misery
I?m watching you drown in treachery

It?s over ? can?t believe it lasted so long
It?s over ? can?t believe it?s now all gone
It?s over ? was it something I did wrong
It?s over ? my love to you was strong

Sincerity over hypocrisy
The only thing you never gave to me
I loved you even through your damn lies
Look into my eyes the heart never lies

Take this knife and cut out my flesh
Scrape the bones and turn me to ash
A slap in the face to this cemetery
Scatter me all over this life of misery

Works nicely does that, although rock-band-ish rather than acoustic type i would say.

How are you structuring it?

 

[Shevchenko]

I am basing it on rock type bandish punk rock to be more precise, a lot of work been put into the guitars

heres a link to how it sounds on guitar pro

http://www.filefactory.com/file/7b35dd/

 

[lancashire666]

if you require any tips or hints on any home recording, engineering or software useage such as guitar rig, amplitube etc just PM me as i work in a number of pro recording studios around manchester and have done more recording than anything else over the last 5 years