Story Hong Kong Days: Chapter 5: Where's Chris: Part 2

[TheGreemSim]

maybe.

i suppose it doesn't have to be where he is, it could be that his house at home explodes for some reason, and he is then forced with the dilemma of whether to go back or not.

THAT..... would be an excellent plot twist.

 

[riz7khan12]

some of the soliders were playing catches with a grenade and one accidentally went off, but luckily no one got hurt.

or someone at the back of the bus was playing a loud war game on their PSP.

 

[treva]

Your driver is a maniac and just ran down all the soldiers. A bit like Otto from The Simpsons.

 

[TheGreemSim]

Your driver is a maniac and just ran down all the soldiers. A bit like Otto from The Simpsons.

I suppose that's quite plausible.

 

[Chewie]

Mr Atkinson popped a balloon by your head.

 

[TheGreemSim]

Oh by the way everyone, just to be clear, my name isn't Drake Thorpe.

 

[TheGreemSim]

Just whipped this one up, I will update it after every match Drake plays. I've also revamped the first post

 

[riz7khan12]

nice..

 

[MaD]

Lol! Manga face :laugh

 

[TheGreemSim]

lol! Manga face :laugh

hell yeah!

 

[harrisb]

can't wait for the next update tgs, this cliffhanger is better than most of the ones in stories you have to pay for.

 

[TheGreemSim]

Sorry to say guys there won't be an update till Tuesday as I'm away until then.

 

[TheGreemSim]

I'm back so tomorrow prepare yourselves for the final part to Tanzanian trouble.

 

[riz7khan12]

yay:banana2

 

[TheGreemSim]

CHAPTER 2: TANZANIAN TROUBLE: PART 5​

A powerful force like no other sent me and the team to our side, the bus was blasted over and smashes on its side. The phone slipped from my hand and was hurled behind me, I didn't know where.

Bullets were fired at us rapidly. The noise was so loud, if we weren't in pain we were in panic. Some of us who hadn't worn our seatbelts where now cramped on the floor, lying on top of one another, I was one of those unfortunate ones.

I found it hard to breathe wedged between a broken seat and an unrecognisable team-mate's shoulder. The firing stopped and there was yelling from outside. I couldn't see much but I could see blood dripping down from the seat above me. It trickled down onto my nose and there was nothing I could do.

Suddenly a large bang came from above, two in fact, I gathered two people had jumped on top of the bus.

"Sisi na la sahihi moja!"
"Sisi na ni!"

I think this meant loosely something like, "We've got the wrong one!" and "We've got to go!"

As far as I was aware, they had left but there were groans and moans coming from the rest of the bus. I was okay but I was worried there were people in the back who would be bleeding to death. The bus was tipped on its side so we had no way of getting out.

In amongst all the cries of pain, faintly I could hear a vehicle slowly approaching in the distance. Perhaps it would stop to come and help us. And I was right, it did stop, and by the sounds of things there were quite a few people surrounding us, there was a huge discussion going outside before somebody climbed up on top of the bus and peered down at our helpless bodies. By this time I had managed to tilt my head upwards and was facing the large muscular Kenyan man directly in the eyes through the cracked windows of the bus. As soon as I made eye contact with him he jumped off and some more yelling continued. Another two men climbed on top of the bus and in broken english one of them said reassuringly

"Please worry not, police and hospitals men are coming, we will out get you soon!"

And with in moments after he said that sirens where screeching in the distance. Help had arrived at last...

TGS

I know I promised this yesterday but I completely forgot to upload it sorry, but at least it's hear now.