vCash Donating/Begging Thread

[Highlander999]

Oh have a cheap shot at the rich kid. I'm shocked Colin, deeply shocked
I copied and pasted that from a haiku site.

 

[WORLD CHAMPIONS]

The original japanese, which you didn't write, was a Haiku but the English translation wasn't.
Not sure about those two either, I'm asking for a traditional Haiku. None of yours have had 17 syllables in total never mind the totals for each line. My class got this pretty quickly and they're infants and also not at Private school

lol........... :laugh nice banter for Tom

Will this Haiku work ?

An old pond;
A frog jumps in--
The sound of water

SOmeone plz disable Google for 10 mins

 

[Cricketman]

* Covered with the flowers,
* Instantly I'd like to die
* In this dream of ours!

^Haiku

 

[barmyarmy]

I copied and pasted that from a haiku site.

As I said they were probably Haiku's in the original Japanese but not when translated.

 

[Highlander999]

To shut this poor, lving in a shack, teacher up who thinks Niddrie is decent, here is take 3

Without flowing wine
How to enjoy lovely
Cherry blossoms?

 

[Cricketman]

There once was a knight named James Lancelot,
Who looked at Blair askance a lot.
So whenever he'd pass,
That beautiful ass,
The front of his pants would advance-a-lot.

Limerick

 

[barmyarmy]

^Haiku

Another person plagiarising Basho
Next person to post something that they didn't write and isn't a Haiku in English gets neg reps from me...

 

[Cricketman]

Acrostic

Very very Green
Can this be?
Atop my reps and under my posts
Sits this beautiful site
Hell, i'd marry it! The beautiful vCash!

lol

 

[barmyarmy]

To shut this poor, lving in a shack, teacher up who thinks Niddrie is decent, here is take 3

Getting there but still wrong (and I'm not going to tell you why).

Limerick

http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/Limerick

 

[Cricketman]

B-A Give Me Some
Some vCash that I can See
Ill be your friend, please?

Happy?

thats a haiku btw

 

[barmyarmy]

Acrostic

Very very Green
Can this be?
Atop my reps and under my posts
Sits this beautiful site
Hell, i'd marry it! The beautiful vCash!

lol

Vcash coming your way for the acrostic.

 

[Highlander999]

You've made me think too much for the day plus made me feel stupid. I'm not happy. A Level English and I can't even do a bloody Haiku, although I had never heard of it before.

You win teacher :

 

[WORLD CHAMPIONS]

Another person plagiarising Basho
Next person to post something that they didn't write and isn't a Haiku in English gets neg reps from me...

I am out of this blunder Are u sure about the neg reppy thing ? You told that you never prefer to give these :cool: Why changing now

 

[Cricketman]

How's my Haiku BA?

 

[barmyarmy]

B-A Give Me Some
Some vCash that I can See
Ill be your friend, please?

Happy?

thats a haiku btw

It is although repeating the word "some" robs it of any sense or meaning. You got the acrostic prize so you can't get the Haiku one.