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young khan is playing well i hope he goes on to make his century whats his 2nd XI average and show me a screenie of him
 
Khan Khan Khan

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West Indian fans Celebrate Khans Century


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Alec Crawford : Yes Tea has come around and teh West Indies have been bowled out for 501. Khan contributed fabulously with 127 in his first test innings. Jerome Lawson(41) Omari Banks (54) and a quickfire 21(27) from Dwayne Bravo. So with 501 off 159.5 overs the game looks like its going the West Indies way so far altohugh looking at this pitch i have to say a draw is the msot likely result.

Finally to mention another debutant Amit Juggarnauth, another debutant who is the youngest member of teh squad and is 23. He is a capable off spinner who has 113 first class wickets under his belt at an average of 23.01. It looks like this pitch could suit him perfectly so lets just hope.


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i will find out after the gmae,if you start a new one he will be in it just go names Imran Khan with the windies you can look
how else do i get it.
 
Oh I thought he was a re gen

36 is a terrible average
 
Yeah but he's not doing too badly for now, guess his true average will appear soon!
 
Can Pakistan Capitalize on Conditions

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Boycott : Good afternoon and this is it after two days play the game is evenly posied. Two early wickets have out the Pakistani batsme under pressure, Umar scoring 9 runs off 25 balls and Imran Farhat going for 16(31) the batsmen were pressured as first 20-1 and then 45-2 Inzaman, Khan and Yousef will need to buckle down and try and get some serious runs to avoid a follow on and make sure they avoid defeat most importantly. Goodnight and we will see you tommorow from the Sky Sports commnetry team farewell.

Taffeq Umar goes early for only 9 and with the score at 20-1 the West Indians raw pace will look to take advantage and get a few mopre wickets before the cose of play.

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The seond to go and for 16 is Imran Farhat getting pinned onto the back foot by Lawson eventualyl nicked one and ws safely pouched by new keeper brian Lara. 45-2 and another wicket could prove very costly for the Pakistani's.

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Here are some shots from the final session of the day.

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Please Post Your Thoughts Its My First Story And I Want A Bit Of Feedback
 
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Great story. One way it could be improved is through the use of photoshop but I don't use it as it is to complicated so it is up to you. Keep going
 
Im confused people are not writing comments does thnis mean my story is rubbish and a waste of time
 
no you have readers they just dont post, also your updates happen to quickly so you dont really give us time to comment slow it down to 1-2 updates per day
 
yoru story has been up for 3 days and it already has 3 pages and you yourself addmitted you didnt get many comments so what are the pages full of? your updates
 
The Battle Of the Morning

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Crawford : Good morning and welcome to the third day of this wonderful test match, the game is currently ver close with the West Indians having made 500 runs and Pakistanis losing 2 early wickets yesterday afternoon. It'll be up to Younis Khan and Inzamam Ul Haq to redeem the innings and try to get close to the West Indians, please follow us through a wonderful day of cricket. Fidel Edweards and Jerome Lawson both reached paces of over 95 MPH on a regular basis yesterday and could cause serious trouble for the batsmen early on. Will they be the most vital players of the day or will Khan and Inzamam show grit and bat through to reach over 500 for the Pakistanis.

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Keep tuned as play is expected to be starting in the 35 minutes time. Thankyou
 
I hope Taylor destroys them! Hes my fav windies player, still loving the story
 

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