Good stuff on the whole. A couple of points though which could be improved
Intro - Good stuff, nice announcement. Sounds like a good vision for Raw. The problem is that you have Kennedy and Snitsky, both are heels, against one another. Always try for Face/Heel.
Kennedy/Snitsky - Good that Snitsky seems psycotic, builds his character well, but Kennedy being so totally beaten makes him look weak. It means Snitsky looks stronger than him. Something you need to think about there.
Womens - Short and to the point. No problems other than whether it would be 10mins long
Kendrick/Punk - Kendrick won? I think Punk is the guy who should be at the top personally. Kendrick doesnt have enough character to be a legitimate challenger.
Booker/Sandman - 30 mins? Raw is only 2 hours long so having a 30min match is unrealistic in the extreme. Sandman winning seemed somewhat random.
WGTT/Cryme Tyme - The double team would be broken up, plus Cryme Tyme are Faces, so they wouldn't use heel tactics like that. Cryme Tyme winning devalues WGTT somewhat.
Kennedy/Kendrick/Sandman - A clothesline layed Kendrick and Sandman out? Its not that strong. Kennedy being injured and still winning makes Kendrick and Sandman look weak, and makes CM Punk and King Booker look even weaker, since they lost to guys who lost to an injured guy. Still, I have no problems with Kennedy in the Main Event scene. He deserves it. I don't get what Snitsky is going to do now though, since Kennedy is challenging Cena.