Highlander999
ICC President
- Joined
- Apr 15, 2006
- Location
- London
You really want to listen to this. Advice from this guy is like gold dust 

hey hows it going. just had a quick flick through your story and its quite impressive. the only comment i would make is that there arent any pictures to complement it. your writing style is very good but its all text. a few images would make it a far more enjoyable read.
just my thoughts anyway. good luck