I have to say ur commentating is great and an indian eccentric much like urself would add another dimention to the commentary...
If theres ever a vote for a commentator, you've got my vote!
Most of your lines however are too specific, try and make them more general.
Instead of:
These two YOUNG BATSMAN have injected ergency into the indian batting line up.
These two BATSMAN have injected ergency into the batting line up.
If theres ever a vote for a commentator, you've got my vote!

Most of your lines however are too specific, try and make them more general.
Instead of:
These two YOUNG BATSMAN have injected ergency into the indian batting line up.
These two BATSMAN have injected ergency into the batting line up.