Brother. I can't sugarcoat words to make you feel better about your creation. If you want an honest opinion, Your creation doesn't look like raina from any angle. You should start from scratch again. I hope next time it will be perfect. But don't make changes in this one, start a new one.
Sure. You don't have to sugercoat anything mate.
But that's not to say him that his creation was a total waste of time and asking to start again.
If you haven't got anything constructive to say, then don't say it.
Not everyone spends time in the academy. Your comment just serves to make the people who spend time leave.
And that's not a nice thing by any means.
And no it isn't perfect by any means, what he has created. But it's not as bad as you make it to be, either.